Two guys shouting at each other, each accusing the other of being a stone for different reasons. One want the other the feel something, and the second wants to first to do something.
When I read, I want to be curious, I want to be surprised, I want to be engaged in looking ahead at the consequences of conflicts and decisions. This sort of novel has a narrative dominated by events and a journey of dynamic awareness.
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